Over the years, many people have viewed success
as the gaining of fame and fortune. While this is true, success encompasses all
kinds of prosperity. Fame and fortune is just one form. The reason why most
people view fame and fortune as the prototype of success is because these two
things usually come to people who have worked long and hard. For the most part,
in order to be and feel successful, one needs to have worked at it. Bob Brown
once declared, “Behind every successful man there are a lot of unsuccessful
years” (Cyber Quotations n.pag.). Colin Powell also stated, “There are no
secrets to success. It is the result of preparation, hard work, learning from
failure” (Cyber Quotations n.pag.). Success is something that usually takes a
lot of effort to get, but is worth it in the end.
Success is also something that is viewed
differently in the eyes of everyone. This is because success means doing what
you have always wanted to do, being where you have always wanted to be. If a
man’s goal in life is to eventually get married to a good wife and have many
happy children, and he accomplishes that, then he could view himself as having
success. Success basically means being happy with what you are doing in life.
John R. Amos’s statement supports this idea, “It's simply a matter of doing
what you do best and not worrying about what the other fellow is going to do”
(Cyber Quotations n.pag.). Just as in the book I read mentioned above; each
woman was successful, even though they all had done something entirely
different with their lives.
Sometimes, success can be experienced after the accomplishment of just a short-term goal. For example, one can feel success after completing a small project at work or school. A person’s life is usually full of many little successes. Success ranges from getting an A on a test or paper to graduating from high school to becoming the CEO of a major company. From little to large, success can come in any size.
In a nutshell, success occurs in many forms and has many meanings. It includes being happy with yourself and being where you want to be in life. It also typically means finishing something that you have worked hard at. In brief, success is happiness and prosperousness that comes after putting forth some form of effort.
Sometimes, success can be experienced after the accomplishment of just a short-term goal. For example, one can feel success after completing a small project at work or school. A person’s life is usually full of many little successes. Success ranges from getting an A on a test or paper to graduating from high school to becoming the CEO of a major company. From little to large, success can come in any size.
In a nutshell, success occurs in many forms and has many meanings. It includes being happy with yourself and being where you want to be in life. It also typically means finishing something that you have worked hard at. In brief, success is happiness and prosperousness that comes after putting forth some form of effort.
I can see evidence of research in your appeal to ethos - that is good. However, the key component of the essay - the thesis statement/topic sentence structure is missing.
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